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#137084 August 21st, 2006 at 07:43 AM
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This is one of my rare, rhyming poems...but I can't wrap my head around a name for it. So...anyone who reads it is free to throw out a name for it. It'll be interesting to see what comes up.

I can't pretend when I'm with you
To be someone I'm not.
Your knowing eyes would see right thru
Whatever disguise I brought.

I can be myself when you're around
And I feel beautiful inside.
I know that you won't bring me down
My heart has no need to hide.

There are times I've tried too hard
To give the love in my heart.
I would give it freely without regard
And they'd tear my soul apart.

I put my heart up on a shelf
Long before I left Wisconsin.
To sit & wait I force myself
Before taking it down once again.

I want so much to give it to you,
But I don't know if you would take it.
I am not afraid of what you'll do
I know you won't purposely break it.

What about you? How do you feel?
Are you a 'Doubting Thomas'?
I'm not sure if it's love, but I know it is real
That much I will promise.

Will you take my hand and walk with me?
There's room in my heart for one more.
It can be fast or slow as you want it to be...
After all, isn't that what forever is for?

#137085 August 22nd, 2006 at 11:02 AM
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How about "An Invitation"?

#137086 August 23rd, 2006 at 12:01 PM
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Will You?

#137087 August 24th, 2006 at 08:14 AM
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hmmm...this one takes thought. I like both of them.

#137088 August 24th, 2006 at 09:16 AM
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It will come to you:-)

#137089 September 1st, 2006 at 04:19 AM
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Did you decide?

#137090 September 6th, 2006 at 10:26 AM
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Can't Pretend?

#137091 September 14th, 2006 at 04:37 AM
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I think I've got it...

A Chance Worth Taking

What do you think??

#137092 September 14th, 2006 at 08:05 PM
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Connie, I like it thumbup

#137093 September 29th, 2006 at 03:38 AM
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Good...then that's what it will be

#137094 September 29th, 2006 at 05:16 AM
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