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#134351 June 9th, 2006 at 06:29 AM
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You robbed me of my childhood,
My self worth and self esteem;
You kept me beaten down so long
That you almost stole my dreams.

I kept them hidden in my heart
Where you could never go,
And watered well by bitter tears,
They struggled hard to grow.

I broke the shackles that bound me--
Cold irons forged by the past;
From the anger, shame and sorrow,
I am free, I am free at last!

#134352 June 9th, 2006 at 08:23 AM
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I really felt that one!
Strong wording,Liked the Poem.
Angie

#134353 June 10th, 2006 at 12:49 AM
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Thanks! I wrote that one for a community forum on domestic violence/sexual abuse.

#134354 June 10th, 2006 at 01:13 PM
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That is an awesome poem, very moving!

#134355 June 25th, 2006 at 04:32 PM
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Seems real, like you lived it.
I can relate to it and you wrote it with authority.
great job.

#134356 June 27th, 2006 at 01:08 AM
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It's very real to me!


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