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#153995 June 11th, 2006 at 06:41 AM
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Observations at the park

I cannot understand why you can sit in a beautiful panoramic setting
And feel so not, beautiful
Un apart of it all

People fishing, walking starring into the water
As if it was a panacea
I too gaze wishfully

I look at an older man, who has been there as long as I.
Not doing much, just peering to the water

Passing time maybe? Mourning, escaping
Just thinking or trying not too?
Possible just as I
Enjoying here more than there

So peaceful unlike most moments
The wind feels like my own
There's a genuine comfort in this solitude
A feeling I wish I could take and splash upon other areas of my life

It's nice here in this moment
I am reminded, how it is to feel

I think people come here to catch their breath
A connection of sorts

Angie

#153996 June 11th, 2006 at 07:40 AM
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A nice portrait of the park!

#153997 June 11th, 2006 at 03:16 PM
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well put

#153998 June 14th, 2006 at 01:16 AM
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Thanks


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