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#146868 August 17th, 2006 at 09:15 AM
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Seasons Of Pain


A frozen winter chill crept in the space between us
Passion lies hidden beneath layers of anger built up overtime
Like a winter snow covering all that was once there
Cruel silences leave only loneliness
Comparable to the eerie whispers heard from the winds as they strip away the leaves at falls end
The heat of the sun attempts to evaporate all the rain that's fallen inside
With each passing season the fog grows heavier
Creating a clouded view of a once shared vision
Watching a haze of confusion form above the manmade pools of regret
With every breath lives anticipation for spring
Unmasking all the dormancy
Awakening a flower that has stopped blooming
From a subtle kiss delivering a warm light
Unfolding the beauty beneath
Hidden and forgotten
Uncovering the newness of a fresh beginning

Ajb©

#146869 August 17th, 2006 at 10:37 AM
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Wow! Been there! Very well written!

#146870 August 17th, 2006 at 11:07 AM
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Thanks Pam,This is one I use on my graphics work.
I think we have all been there;-)
Thanks again, I do enjoy reading the variety here.
On a few writing sites, never thought there would be poetry here...Great site this is...

#146871 August 21st, 2006 at 08:02 AM
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You've managed to say what I've been trying to describe in my mind...thank you.

#146872 August 23rd, 2006 at 11:49 AM
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Connie....Thank you! Must be the best compliment you can get...is when someone connects to your words:-) Thanks
Angie


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