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Posted By: chenno Blueprint Traits and trails - December 28th, 2006 at 12:41 PM
Blueprint Traits and trails


Part of me unfolds, in the unknown flecks of color that outline your eyes
Watching as your stare draws you from the moment
Sketching walls of confusion, Interior pain builds barricades of anger
Defensively preventing trespassers
You stand still before me, however I see you in every direction
The concept of life has grown within each of your steps
Amazed at your uniqueness, proudly content I see
My greatest gift unwraps with time, revealing continuous presents

So many exteriors to select, knowing just one wont measure up
The passion for your dreams, Is your character
Never let go of what defines you
I can feel your frustration, when I cant see your face
A heavy world weighs down your smile at times, leaving a lost expression
I recognize that familiar silhouette, from the shadows of youth

My heart spills a trail for you to follow, trying to map the best pathways
Many passages without marked destination, trial and error learn as you go
Sadly aware I'm the passenger, unable to choose your way
At the same time knowing, forever at every turn I'm there

Part of me always remains as part of you


AJB ©2002
Posted By: afgreyparrot Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - December 28th, 2006 at 09:07 PM
Angie...I love this. thumbup
Posted By: plants 'n pots Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - December 29th, 2006 at 05:20 AM
Angie ~ you have moved me to tears with this very personal piece.
How clearly you invision things - wonderful job! kissies
Posted By: chenno Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - December 29th, 2006 at 05:28 AM
Thanks;-)
Posted By: Shirley4 Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - December 29th, 2006 at 10:36 AM
I love what you write and I love where it comes from. You are deep, lady!!!
Posted By: chenno Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - December 29th, 2006 at 11:06 AM
Thanks Shirl...;-)
Posted By: SpringFever_dup1 Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - December 30th, 2006 at 09:09 AM
Love it Angie Great Job!! You always write with great feeling the way it should be!! thumbup muggs
Posted By: chenno Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - December 30th, 2006 at 10:53 PM
Thanks Rita;-)
Posted By: penny in ontario Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - January 4th, 2007 at 02:15 AM
thumbup thumbup Great one!!!
Posted By: chenno Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - January 4th, 2007 at 02:37 AM
Thanks Penny:-)
Posted By: Tuame Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - January 7th, 2007 at 09:24 PM
Nice, I like
Posted By: chenno Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - January 8th, 2007 at 10:59 PM
Thanks;-)
Posted By: SomeGuy Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - January 10th, 2007 at 11:43 AM
Did it work?
Were you able to submit the prayer to the one who disappeared?
Did your love acknowledge the pain you felt?

If I am presumptious in asking, please let me know so I don't repeat-offend.
Posted By: chenno Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - January 10th, 2007 at 10:39 PM
Hi There...I just write whatever I feel at the moment,same as a painting..once it leaves me it becomes whatever it is. I never really say why or how? due to the fact it always means something different to everyone:-)

Thanks for your reply:-)
Posted By: LoveLilac Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - January 17th, 2007 at 06:11 PM
nice!
Posted By: chenno Re: Blueprint Traits and trails - January 17th, 2007 at 09:47 PM
Thank you:-)
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