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Blueprint Traits and trails
#165954 December 28th, 2006 at 12:41 PM
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Blueprint Traits and trails


Part of me unfolds, in the unknown flecks of color that outline your eyes
Watching as your stare draws you from the moment
Sketching walls of confusion, Interior pain builds barricades of anger
Defensively preventing trespassers
You stand still before me, however I see you in every direction
The concept of life has grown within each of your steps
Amazed at your uniqueness, proudly content I see
My greatest gift unwraps with time, revealing continuous presents

So many exteriors to select, knowing just one wont measure up
The passion for your dreams, Is your character
Never let go of what defines you
I can feel your frustration, when I cant see your face
A heavy world weighs down your smile at times, leaving a lost expression
I recognize that familiar silhouette, from the shadows of youth

My heart spills a trail for you to follow, trying to map the best pathways
Many passages without marked destination, trial and error learn as you go
Sadly aware I'm the passenger, unable to choose your way
At the same time knowing, forever at every turn I'm there

Part of me always remains as part of you


AJB ©2002

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#165955 December 28th, 2006 at 09:07 PM
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Angie...I love this. thumbup

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#165956 December 29th, 2006 at 05:20 AM
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Angie ~ you have moved me to tears with this very personal piece.
How clearly you invision things - wonderful job! kissies

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#165957 December 29th, 2006 at 05:28 AM
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Thanks;-)

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#165958 December 29th, 2006 at 10:36 AM
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I love what you write and I love where it comes from. You are deep, lady!!!

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#165959 December 29th, 2006 at 11:06 AM
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Thanks Shirl...;-)

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#165960 December 30th, 2006 at 09:09 AM
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Love it Angie Great Job!! You always write with great feeling the way it should be!! thumbup muggs

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#165961 December 30th, 2006 at 10:53 PM
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Thanks Rita;-)

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thumbup thumbup Great one!!!

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#165963 January 4th, 2007 at 02:37 AM
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Thanks Penny:-)

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#165964 January 7th, 2007 at 09:24 PM
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Nice, I like

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#165965 January 8th, 2007 at 10:59 PM
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Thanks;-)

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#165966 January 10th, 2007 at 11:43 AM
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Did it work?
Were you able to submit the prayer to the one who disappeared?
Did your love acknowledge the pain you felt?

If I am presumptious in asking, please let me know so I don't repeat-offend.

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#165967 January 10th, 2007 at 10:39 PM
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Hi There...I just write whatever I feel at the moment,same as a painting..once it leaves me it becomes whatever it is. I never really say why or how? due to the fact it always means something different to everyone:-)

Thanks for your reply:-)

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#165968 January 17th, 2007 at 06:11 PM
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nice!

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#165969 January 17th, 2007 at 09:47 PM
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Thank you:-)


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