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#135811 December 23rd, 2006 at 06:19 AM
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Sadness is

A mirror, broken, reflecting slivers
Echoing lost jewels, tarnished
Cracked fragments, open wounds
Empty silences, red air bleeds
Living together, alone
Magic carpets swept under rugs
Remembering, forgetting, feeling
Everything, nothing


Sadness is

A clock ticking, hearing lost blinks
Blue breathing, gasping
Cold, odorless, spaces of ice
Dreary eyes leaking pain puddles
Motionless moments, frozen
Time, handless holding


Sadness is

A wallflower, saving dances
The dance card fills with tomorrows
The same song, never changing
A broken record skips years
Waiting to dance


Sadness is


Ending, without ever beginning


AJB© 2002

#135812 December 23rd, 2006 at 07:51 AM
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Oh my!!!!!!!!!! Did you write that????!!!!
That is the sadest, most beautiful poem I think I've ever read. It is so deep and meaningful!!!!
luv luv luv I really love it!!!!!!!!!!!!

#135813 December 23rd, 2006 at 08:02 AM
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Beautiful poem, Angie. Now, if you don't mind...pass the kleenex, please...

Dianna

#135814 December 24th, 2006 at 02:05 AM
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That was intense and beautiful!

#135815 December 24th, 2006 at 10:37 PM
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Angie !! You just put in writing how I have felt for last 5 years ters How did you do that?

If it hadn't been for two people I wouldn't be here right now. One is my granddaughter Bethany the other one of the dearest and best friends any man could have my friend Patsy. Thank you for writing what I felt but could not put into words.

#135816 December 25th, 2006 at 12:13 AM
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Jimmy kissies Thank you

Dianna and Triss and Shirley,Thanks:-)

I wrote that in 2002,a few other poets and I wrote several peices and did a cd for a childrens organization for the disability and the arts.

I love poetry and art and it makes me feel great when someone can feel something after reading or seeing it.Then it becomes there own..Thanks

#135817 December 25th, 2006 at 02:00 AM
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2002 ?? Billie passed away April 20, 2002 she also wrote poems this is getting weird.

#135818 December 25th, 2006 at 04:31 AM
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Jimmy I am so sorry about Billie.You know I do not find it weird,people connect for all kinds of reasons:-)and I am glad we did;-)I would be happy to share more with you whenever you like;-)Jimmy,Just pm me anytime..

To be a poet
is a condition,
not a profession. "

Robert Frost


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