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The Storm
#18847 Apr 10th, 2007 at 11:40 AM
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Out of control
Life on hold

Spinning, dancing, music loud
All alone in the crowd

Laughing, crying, begging, screaming
Wet with sweat, body gleaming

Twisting, writhing, punching, kicking
Time bomb ticking

Nobody else can hear it?
"CAN'T ANYONE ELSE HEAR THIS SHI7?"

If only I knew real sanity
I know that I would save me..........

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melcon6 #18929 Apr 10th, 2007 at 12:30 PM
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I really like this. Captured the essence of a personal storm...
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Dixie Angel #18955 Apr 10th, 2007 at 12:47 PM
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Wow!! What a contrast between this and the calm!!!
And it really depicts the ups and downs of a persons mood swings!! and of life!!!
Like it a lot.

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#20075 Apr 11th, 2007 at 12:13 PM
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I like it, from the calm to the storm, I can relate, & I appreciate that in a poem. You are a great writer Mel thumbup

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melcon6 #21637 Apr 13th, 2007 at 12:54 PM
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Nice one, Mel. As I read it too, I began to read faster and faster. You've captured an intense mood. WTG!

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